Yay! Here's the second pass at the first act of Apachita. Thanks a ton to Bobby and Katy for the good advice. As usual, critiques are welcome. I hope the story reads a bit better now. :) Having a little fun with color too.
oh wow, this is really coming out! I love the flow, I understood the set. and the color really is nice to see a sample of what is to come.!! thumbs up!
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oh wow, this is really coming out! I love the flow, I understood the set. and the color really is nice to see a sample of what is to come.!! thumbs up!
Very clear!!! :D
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